Saturday, 29 March 2008

50-Word Story

Those Eyes
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That girl in the asylum used to have such pretty eyes. Once they were a warm brown, adorned with liquid kohl and the loveliest smoky eyelashes, flashing fire and joy. Men would have killed for those eyes.
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Now she has the dead gaze you know, ever since she was raped.

3 comments:

Jules 25:17 said...

Abrupt end, but eh wtf its a 50-word story. I'd like to see you write a 75-word one on "Those eyes"

neeli said...

abrupt, but it stings

Anonymous said...

I love the twist. Very in-the-face end...which is good because it's hard to forget.